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    原标题:【每周日学点英语】小秘诀,简单变换表达,句子质量瞬间提升

    同学们写作时,有没有口语化特别严重的情况?

    就像平时说话一样,张口就来,但回过头再看,发现写得太随意了。

    这种现象我们叫"语体偏低"!

    写作和口语属于不同的语体,用词造句都有不同。

    有时候,我们简单变化几个单词,就能让句子语体上升,读起来瞬间感觉质量提升了。

    这种方式用在写作自查上非常管用,写完之后,自己把每个句子回顾一遍,看是否有提升语体的空间。久而久之,我们的写作习惯就会改变,雅思写作的分数自然而然就上去啦~

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    1) For example, you work in a big factory.

    Improved:

    Supposeyou work in a big factory.

    2) We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

    Improved:

    We will get nowhereif we rely on luck.

    3) Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

    Improved:

    Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

    4) They can"t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

    Improved:

    They cannot tell right from wrong.

    5) It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

    Improved:

    It will help children learn to make good use of time.

    6) Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

    Improved:

    Since people areneversatisfied with their status, they want further development.

    7) The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

    Improved:

    The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bringthem big money.

    8) They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

    Improved:

    They like an active life rather thana peaceful one.

    9) Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

    Improved:

    Some cigarettes may cost even more.

    10) Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

    Improved:

    Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages theinventionof new products.

    11) It is very necessary to have more qualified scientists and technicians.

    Improved:

    Qualified scientists and technicians arein great demand.

    12) This knowledge will become a part of your body.

    Improved:

    This knowledge will becomepart of you.

    13) They cannot think clearly.

    Improved:

    They cannotthink straight.

    14) Money can improve their living standard.

    Improved:

    Money can improve their life.

    15) Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

    Improved:

    Parents alwaysexpect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

    16) One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

    Improved:

    One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

    17) Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

    Improved:

    Many parents sendtheir children to piano classes.

    18) Smoking can help you relax your mind.

    Improved:

    Cigarettes can help you relax.

    19) What"s about nonsmokers?

    Corrected:

    What about nonsmokers?

    20) Why not to be a non-smoker?

    Corrected:

    Why not be a non-smoker?

    21) Everyone will have many friends in his life.

    Improved:

    Everyonehas friendsin his life.

    22) So I feel I breathe more comfortably now.

    Improved:

    So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

    23) People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

    Improved:

    People are nevertoo old to learn.

    24) No one knows all the things.

    Improved:

    No one knows everything.

    25) They will learn the bad habits.

    Improved:

    They will develop bad habits.

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